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Your words surround me;
Twist and twirl in front of my eyes.
Everywhere I look, everywhere I run,
Again and again I hear goodbyes.

Your voice rings out,
A mist only my mind can see.
My body rooted to the ground,
My heart never to be set free.

The memories bring pain to my heart,
Enemies I cannot hope to outrun.
Our story is a tragedy;
A history that life has undone.

I wish to see beyond you,
But to life I am blind.
Your shadow covers the light;
Only darkness in my mind.
Enjoy! :-) Feel free to comment!
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing
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EnchantedImagination Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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EmilyJanus Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome!
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EnchantedImagination Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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DreamingMind-set Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great poem, feels like a break up to me, I know that feeling pretty well. Great job.
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EnchantedImagination Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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musicalsammy4 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
Sure thing~ :hug:
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musicalsammy4 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
:huggle: Lovely~
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EnchantedImagination Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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GeekGirl11 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. That is EXACTLY how I felt after my first boyfriend broke up with me. It's a fantastic poem too!
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