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Ice and Fire

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Your eyes lock onto mine,
Icy blue, they freeze the space
between us, and fill it with tension
so intense it threatens
to cut me open and penetrate my heart,
pouring in it hatred and jealousy.

I break away from your gaze,
My heart beating out a warning
To my body; to run, to escape.
I am on fire,
Blood rushing through my veins,
Searching for a release.

Now, with my back turned
I can feel you watching me,
Your shadow replaces mine.
Every move I make,
Every sight I take in,
You criticise;
Whispers in the dark.

With me the act ends;
The mask rises off your face,
I can see right through you;
What lies beneath.
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angelenroute's avatar
Very good poem!!

Couple of minor thoughts, perhaps just my opinion:

pouring in it hatred and jealousy.
(suggest deleting "it")

Every sight i take in,
(change "i" to "I")

I can see right through you;
(suggest deleting "can")